The only relevance is that I have a habit of correcting certain mangled English phrases ("all intensive purposes" is another one that I find really grating)....small grammar and spelling errors on the internet don't bother me near as much
Regarding you build, the main point of going 18 into Ret is to pick up Crusade. You therefore want to drop Seal of Command and 2 points from either PoJ or Conviction to pick it up. The rest of the build is fine.
